2007年11月1日 星期四

Why did you choose your major?

I decided to study Mechanic in may, 2001. The reason was depend on my interesting.
Since my childhood, I fell in any machine as like washing machine, clock, electric fan...etc.
When I took apart the machine to tirm the component. I found out the relish that is machine.
Therefore, I choosed an alternative academic track to ME in KUAS .

2 則留言:

蠻牛 提到...

1.The reason was depend on my interesting.

3.沒有,好像少了什麼...
4.NO
5.有...但不多
6.有
7.第二段(Since my childhood, I fell in any machine as like washing machine, clock, electric fan...etc.)
8.在喜好方面可以多說明一點~

Linda1 提到...

1. Topic sentence: He decided to study Mechanic because of his interesting.
2. He decided to study Mechanic because of his interesting.
A. Since his childhood, he fell in any machine.
B. He found out the relish that is machine.
3. Yes.
4. No.
5. Yes.
6. I think this paragraph need to be more organized.
7. I enjoyed the most is that “When I took apart the machine to tirm the component. I found out the relish that is machine.”
8. Who affected you the most as you chose your major?